Unquiet Desperation

Unquiet Desperation => The Wilderness => Topic started by: Mr. Goldberg on June 21, 2008, 04:06:03 PM



Title: Unrequited Hate
Post by: Mr. Goldberg on June 21, 2008, 04:06:03 PM
We've all had it (unrequited love) but how about unrequited hate ? Does your detestation register or do people just deter your protestations with a flimsy hand gesture and a condescending look and verbal babble as you boil in a pot of purple rage ?


Answers in a poem please...


Title: Re: Unrequited Hate
Post by: ~vxn~ on June 21, 2008, 11:43:15 PM
ppl NEVER go without knowing how pist i am at them.  one way or another, i get my point across.

Backstabber

Betrayal tapers
to a fine point
with whimsical swiftness.
A deadly barb
that penetrates
my spinal column—
with such ease
you destroy.

^ one of my closest friends liked to sleep with my boyfriends in high school.  she was nice to my face and spread rumors about me behind my back.  i knew the whole time.  i got even.  i felt better.


Legion

I derive pleasure in ways I can’t measure
from deeds that may seem quite odd.
I destroy all of my toys,
because I enjoy playing God. 

I’ve aligned events unkind—
I really should be ashamed.
You invite it all when first you call
me by my most sacred of names.

Spoken permission and your submission,
it almost turns back my eyes.
It isn’t right if you won’t put up a fight—
this boredom I definitely despise. 

^ i hate weak ppl who start a shitstorm and then run away.  BS.  stand here and fight.  


Pit

I’ll pare you
like ripened fruit
and spit your moldy seeds
like rotten enemies
from my mouth.

^ i wrote this after thinking about a bar fight.  teeth getting knocked out.  cuts from glass.  ah, the good old days.


Hemoglobin

Bountiful splatterings—
the musky scent
of triumph surging.
Grasping
at droplets greedily,
the wetness of them
exposing frailty.
Left numb
and vulnerable. 

^ b!tch, sure--i'm not going to argue that one.  lol.  but never call me a c_nt.  especially not to my face.  that is what happens when i get called the C word.  i hate that word.

i hope this reply isn't too excessive--it's so hard to pick just one.


Title: Re: Unrequited Hate
Post by: Mr. Goldberg on June 22, 2008, 01:03:18 PM
Vixen you've made my day cascade into rhapsody - a true heart resistance fighter,
keep blowing up those boy bridges when the  convoys least expect it, take a Gauloise Bleu in a cafe, idly playing with your cappucino froth, then lob that grenade and duck under the table when the Top Bitch Staff Car turns up.

If in doubt. Frag Out.
Your Legacy: a half drunk coffee
and a lipsticked cigarette end still smouldering.
As you rearrange your beret and pencil skirt
to promenade the shopping mall.
Because that's what nice girls do.
Leaving behind an offal of what once
passed themselves off as your friend.

If you need me or Uncle Barney let us know.
We'll be in town.


Title: Re: Unrequited Hate
Post by: ~vxn~ on June 23, 2008, 04:37:29 PM
excellent!   :-*


Title: Re: Unrequited Hate
Post by: Mr. Goldberg on June 25, 2008, 02:15:10 PM
O Vixen what does it take to get you to cross that insignificant puddle they call the Atlantic Ocean that keeps us apart ???   :-*


Title: Re: Unrequited Hate
Post by: ~vxn~ on June 25, 2008, 11:55:33 PM
candy and promises of granduer. 


Title: Re: Unrequited Hate
Post by: Mr. Goldberg on June 26, 2008, 12:27:55 PM
Oh my Trixy Vixy you're talking to the right man.... Candy ...what's your poison...white chocolate, dark, Cadbury's Milk, Creme Eggs, Raspberry Ruffle, Coffee Cremes, Liquorice Allsorts, Chocolate Limes, M&Ms or what you call out there a Hershey Bar, Peanut Brittle ?

I'm student of Roald Dahl - seld proclaimed expert on the history of confectionary. My dear I'll be popping the marshmallows between those pert lips of yours till they burst in a rainbow apocalypse...the whites
 the reds...fondling jam filled fancies to your creamy caress.

GRANDEUR ???

A Princess...Wot a Princess my Trickly Treacle Vixen. Syrupy to the suck in your black taffetas moulded to your very contours.  Bitter sweet with amoretto tincture while the hyenas howl in Hunger City red mutant eyes gawping for more. I'll light you green candles and spoon you Tiramasou...and British Trifles...Queen Victoria's Indulgence
 


Title: Re: Unrequited Hate
Post by: Will on June 26, 2008, 04:05:25 PM
I'll light you green candles and spoon you Tiramasou...and British Trifles...Queen Victoria's Indulgence

Hey Nat, if vxn's not interested, I'll be your cuddle bunny if you'll feed me tiramasou. 


Title: Re: Unrequited Hate
Post by: Mr. Goldberg on June 27, 2008, 11:23:17 AM
Roll up ladies roll up !!! All fighting over your Uncle Nat with choc chips and marshmallow flying everywhere...just how I like it !!!


Title: Re: Unrequited Hate
Post by: Ploe on July 01, 2008, 03:09:31 PM
What a very sour turn this thread has made.

I do not hate, because I do not care.
Path crossed,
awkward?
No ta.

Live and let live,
just stay out of my way.


Title: Re: Unrequited Hate
Post by: Mr. Goldberg on July 09, 2008, 04:51:07 PM
What a very sour turn this thread has made.

I do not hate, because I do not care.
Path crossed,
awkward?
No ta.

Live and let live,
just stay out of my way.



Until someone says.... 

"Oi Man fellah ? Yus thee !!!  Cum o'er 'ere..."


Title: Re: Unrequited Hate
Post by: The Bolshevik Dandy on July 09, 2008, 07:43:47 PM
Confections rot ya teeth....
and what you're goin' Nat will send ya blind!!!


Title: Re: Unrequited Hate
Post by: ~vxn~ on July 09, 2008, 10:50:22 PM
hello unrequited hate thread.  i would like to thank my ex for reminding me why he IS an ex.  thank you, you bastard. 

carry on.


Title: Re: Unrequited Hate
Post by: Will on July 10, 2008, 04:45:57 PM
Unrequited hate is a weird term.  If you hate someone, then they've done something to make you hate them which would lead one to believe they're a bad person.  But if you tell them you hate them, and they still don't hate you...well, there's something to be said for that.   


Title: Re: Unrequited Hate
Post by: Mr. Goldberg on July 11, 2008, 04:31:03 PM
hello unrequited hate thread.  i would like to thank my ex for reminding me why he IS an ex.  thank you, you bastard. 

carry on.

Trixy Vixy is your EX on these boards ? Which one of us is it ?


Title: Re: Unrequited Hate
Post by: ~vxn~ on July 11, 2008, 07:44:02 PM
hell no.  i never let an ex follow me anywhere--and i never follow them.  i'd leave this site for eternity without a backward glance. 


Title: Re: Unrequited Hate
Post by: Mr. Goldberg on July 12, 2008, 10:51:08 AM
Dearest Vixen...we appear to have led, to some degree, parallel lives...I've had  similar scenarios of M.A.I. (mutually assured indifference)...gets harder though doesn't it ? When you incept a mutally assured avoidance policy you start running out of places to go. Not only to avoid the ex but also anyone who may know them who might report back....we should swap schematics. In secret.

 :-*


Title: Re: Unrequited Hate
Post by: ~vxn~ on July 15, 2008, 08:09:46 PM
i am unlike most ppl my ex (or plural) would associate with.  i'm not worried about reportings back--i just don't like very public arguments or the (further) trashing of my reputation--internet or otherwise.  which is exactly what would happen. 

i hate my garbage men.  lol.


Title: Re: Unrequited Hate
Post by: Mr. Goldberg on July 19, 2008, 12:15:48 PM
i am unlike most ppl my ex (or plural) would associate with.  i'm not worried about reportings back--i just don't like very public arguments or the (further) trashing of my reputation--internet or otherwise.  which is exactly what would happen. 

 

Ahhhh I've just endured a dose of that on another website Trix .... Lurkers wereva you look I was net virgin then but I suppose you live and learn. I'm just sorry for the saddos that write it/read it/believe it...fill their own empty hours with it. Catharsis of their own boredom I think. 


Title: Re: Unrequited Hate
Post by: The Bolshevik Dandy on August 25, 2008, 01:55:07 AM
Catharic relaease of boredom and intellectual penury is what makes forums go 'round---your Uncle Barney told me,Nat.


Title: Re: Unrequited Hate
Post by: Mr. Goldberg on August 26, 2008, 12:33:47 PM
Well he would say that...once you removed his gag.


Title: Re: Unrequited Hate
Post by: The Bolshevik Dandy on September 21, 2008, 02:48:12 AM
NO HATE IS 'UNREQUITED' BECAUSE ONE ALWAYS DEVELOPS IT WITH CERTAIN GUILE AND MEANING AND WITH NO UN-CERTAINTY...AND GENERALLY THEY REALISE AND HATE YOU TOO.......REAL HATE IS ALWAYS MADE MUTUAL....